Yes! the pace will pick up! whot! XD yes! Happiest day of my winter break - You UPDATED! *fan girl cheer* I can't wait for more updates. Really. The peak into Randis' life, the details of Elises' family. XD I am in love. hahahahaha. XD anyways; yeah! please please, update soon, I love the rate of the updates back in the writers' month contest thingy. XD it was so fast. XD I love it! Update soon please. XD I love this chapter. man, i love it! XD

:/ I feel bad for Randi

But oh well.

HGope things get in order soon

Love the story so far! As always D

Sam

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You cannot tell me that you will not have Elise confront her brothers, I hope she finds out somehow and totally lights into them.

Also I don't exactly understand what is up with Riley and them. I don't really get what is up with Heath. did he have a crush on Randi or does he resent her because of Elise.

I would really like to know more about Randi; she's really interesting o xD and i get this feeling that this story focuses more on Randi personally than Elise... xD anyways; yay updated! xD I hope another one is coming up soon! and oh; Merry X-mas O or Happy Holidays :D or both :D oh oh! and happy new year xD too XD lol.

Nice work! thanks for the update

that last paragraph was deep. It is as if Elise is starting to see why randy hated secrets.

I think its great how you keep delving further and further into Randi's past, piece after piece to keep the suspension going.

It really makes for an awesome read and gets your readers more anxious to read the next chapter (I would know, I've been refreshing the page every chance of every day I get just to see if another chapter has been added)

Still waiting to see when we're going to meet Randi's "parents"

Keep up the "rawesome" job!

-Spawner

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at the start you sort of lost me

and i dislike Riley's attitude towards Randi

i mean wtf?

Bleh

but awesome chapter ] i sense something is goin to happen!

am i right?

:P

So I was going to read this when you first started it, but got caught up in other things. Why read one chapter at a time when I can read 19 straight instead? (would have read 20, but decided I needed the 3 hours of sleep I got before taking a final exam...)

Alright so this story is amazing. You managed to make unique characters (read: not just rehashing Juls and Travis, though there is a similarity between them) and a wonderful story. My only criticism is that how the whole "meet the family" worked out seemed really cliche. It was pretty much what I expected to happen. Other than that, this has been, and I'm sure will continue to be a great read!

Baxter

just in case i haven't said it congrats on the win, cause you deserved it!WHOOT!

Love he last couple of chaps just been 2 lazy to review. finally a glimpse into randi's life but something is still missing. update please

It was a good idea they didn't leave immediately. They have more time to settle things down. Nice input on Randi's past. Glad that Elise finally told. Confessions are flowing in.. Good work!

Man was Roger dense... I would probably have added something about him always sensing this but he was stubbornly refusing to acknowledge how she seemed to have no interest in him and way too much interest in "Rita" which is why he called Randi that in the first place.

great chapter

Awesome stuff! i didn't expect it to be a relatively calm discussion but it's high on emotions!

aww~ only one chapter.

but...oh, my, god! Amazing, amazing, amazing! I hope you would update soon, it was a really really good chapter. xD i can't think of anything productive to say; other than..

up date soon please!

up date soon please!

up date soon please!

I was so eager for this chapter. and I got it. xD yay! anyways; yes; up date please o Lol. XD (yes i am demanding XD)

Oh no, this is bad. Why can't Elise just say it? She's old enough to be independent from her parents. And they'll accept her eventually. I hate Roger. He just doesn't get the message and is so desperate. Can't he get the message that Elise doesn't like him? Of course Elise's family is saying otherwise but still. Poor Randi. I hope Elise admits it before Randi walks out of that door.