|Reviews for Sweet Oblivion|
| Guest chapter 15 . 5/28/2013
Good suspense- don't wait to write next ch- some of us are hanging on
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/6/2012
i wonder what will happen next
| Alexandrawrites chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
er... it was really good in the begining. The end of this chapter was fine as well. But I kind of lost my interest in it with the vamp thing. if that is what's going on here. :(
| Scorpiongurl324 chapter 15 . 7/23/2009
Awesome chapter, sorry I'm just reading it now, but I've been busy. I loved it and Update SOON!
| thunderxblaze chapter 15 . 7/7/2009
Aw :) This was one of the best chapters. :D
| YukiKomorebi chapter 15 . 7/6/2009
Nice story you've got going here. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm quite interested in what's going to happen now between Ryley and Ian so do please update soon. _
| YukiKomorebi chapter 2 . 7/5/2009
Not a bad chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one to see if she gets to meet Ian again. Hopefully all goes well for her. _
| MyLifeIsMe chapter 15 . 7/4/2009
Wow a lot happened here, but I'm so glad Ian's back in Ryley's dreams, I was beginning to worry it would never happen again.
Anyway, this as in them being together in the chapter was so heartfelt. I kinda feel sorry for Ian cause he honestly believes that Ryley will run away from him if she found out who he was.
Moving on :D, loved the chapter and still loving the story, glad you updated :D
| stefanieyadig chapter 15 . 7/4/2009
I loved that chapter. Ian is so freaking sweet! He makes me all giddy and warm and fuzzy inside. There are only a few character ive ever read about make me feel that way, and ian makes me feel that way. lmao. oh, n i was afraid this would be some stupid twilight ripoff amd im so glad its not! ill review often as possible. cant wait for the next chapter!
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 6 . 7/4/2009
Really really good. I love the dreams. Dreams are such a cool thing to write about, and you did it perfectly :) I must say, I adore the way that you make the ordinary seem extraordinary, and little things seem really amazing, its a great talent to have. Like how you wrote about the listening so hard, thing, that you cant think anything else. Its perfectly written. I havent really even picked up any mistakes. Great work, your welcome, everything Ive said is true :)
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 2 . 7/3/2009
Okay, last review I forgot to comment on the fact that your intial introduction was amazing. Like the best I had read since god knows when, like actually, so many real books dont have as good of a begining paragraph as this story did.
Your language and the structure of your sentences is all perfect, adn well synchronised. I love the fact that you started the whole thing with a characters death. I love that whole concept ae :O
The thought that you have put into every last sentence is amazing, and its just the perfect coming together of assumptions made by the character and facts that are actually reality in the story. And your messages behind the words are also very good, plus it is overbrimming with emotion. Your writing is crazily good, and even though I've only read like two chapters, I can already see you have a real talent.
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 7/3/2009
Okay, at first I coundnt work it out. Like, after the bit that said...
But then I realised that it was a PoV change, and it was all cool :) That was a really great, really intrueging first chapter, I really loved it. I think sometimes the intial chapter has to be short and snappy to hook the readers in. I really loved this beginning :)
| Izzey chapter 15 . 7/3/2009
wow. poor ian and riley, they just can't cut a break can they? awesome chapter, and i can't wait for the next one!
| Stephanie Church chapter 14 . 6/19/2009
PLEASE update soon. This is one of my favorite sories and i look forward to a new chapter!
you are doing an amazing job and dont let anyone tell you otherwise
| Scorpiongurl324 chapter 14 . 6/2/2009
I'm enjoying this story very much! It's one of my favorites, srry I haven't read it lately, I've been real busy with final exams, final projects and returning all my textbooks. My life is a little hectic right now, I needed to find a graduation dress, and shoes for prom. UPDATE SOON! How is Ryley and Ethan relationship going to work with Ian and Ryley's relationship? I'm HOOKED!