I love your story! Update Soon! I think it was good to put one chapter into James' perspective to give us, the reader, a taste of his world.

-Kia

But he's not turning into a normal vampire is he? And we knew he could not do anything to Mia either.

JM

yes it does make me want to give him a hug, he seems so desolate... D good chapter

I liked hearing from James so in your story does it mean when your a vamp you have no heart or soul anymore.

loved the chapter! how much does Emmy really know? or was it just a strange coincidence? anyway i'm excited about hearly James' side to all of this so update soon! :)

Well, I think the story is AMAZING.

& that you should spend every minute of every day writing on it (:

Seriously.

I loved James in this chapter the more the better he was interesting you know, please update asap sorry for the short reviews but I share a room and can't risk waking the person up I promise my next review will be long anyway update

Last line was perfect I loved it I honestly did

Great Chapter I love James character his really interesting and Carl

Loved it really intense

So i admit it I'm a sucker for vampire love stories damn Twilight and so here I am, this was well written interesting and the characters were there own people this is a well written story that deserves more reviews and attension and I can't wait to read more

Ew David...he's such a scumbag and a creep-0 (yes a zero), nothing beats James. James is awesome. He's crazy strong. Loved this violent chapter, James reminds me of Gears of War as a whole because of how ruthless he is. James pwns Skorge!

It's good to know that James actually has character and feelings and isn't just some one dimensional "character" trying to convince everyone he's a vampire. Good chapter, hope to find out more about James soon.

Aw, so sweet, I like how hes not completely changed that, adds a little twist to the usual vampire cliche.

JM

loved the chapter, i'm gonna miss James if you do decide to kep him away for awhile! :0 oh and my grandma is doing fine now, she went through surgery and stuff and she should be ok, thanks! well, can't wait for more, update soon! :)