Reviews for Temptation of the Moon
nicolemegannn chapter 4 . 11/19/2008
jeeze, nice guy that David turned out to be. (place sarcasm here) anyway, another cliffhanger? ugh, just be sure to update soon! :)
nicolemegannn chapter 3 . 11/19/2008
love the chapter. and its sorta a weird coincidence that my grandma is in the hospital from a heart attack, and her name is Carly... weird. anyway, love the story so far!
Jevanminx chapter 4 . 11/19/2008
I do not like David at all, he's just weird. I do however love James, but then who wouldn't, hehehe.

JM
fir3hazard chapter 4 . 11/19/2008
your story is really good can't wait to read more
LifeisCereal chapter 4 . 11/19/2008
Love it so far! :3
Ashley Heimberger chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Oh, wow! I'm officially in love with your story! I only had to read a couple of words and I was instantly hooked! Your story is very interesting and the James character is very intriguing. Great job! I can't wait, until you post another chapter ]
Grace1o9 chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
hey nice story hope you write more to it ...

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Warhol chapter 3 . 11/16/2008
Your story is amazing.

I love James character, he's so mysterious.
Amber chapter 3 . 11/16/2008
wow! this is a really interesting story... ive been so obsest with vampire stories since I read Stephanie Meyer's Twilight books and I havent found a story that has really caught my interest since... but i really do like this story so up the great work!
Michael chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
Excellent second chapter. Those are some wild kids, partying at a lake, didn't they watch Friday the 13th? Lots of questions need to be answered soon! Waiting for Chapter 3 now.
nicolemegannn chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
nice chapter! :) that was a little frustrating, telling us who saved her then leaving it with him kissing her out of no where! All i can say is that if you're gonna leave cliff hangers, you better update soon! :) love the story so far! :)
EveningStar7 chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
Wow! That was fast. But really that just makes the story all more appealing to me. When something controversial happens at the begining that is.

I love this so far :]

Update soon!

-Danika
Kyrina chapter 2 . 11/8/2008
sounds good! update soon. :D
sunshinegirl206 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
I really liked this i cant wait to read more of it!
jordanwrites4 chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
I love this! Keep writing, it's amazing.

I'm writing a vampire novel myself, and it's my favorite thing to write or read.

(:
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