he's done the first move wat i must say is cute nd like Carrie said bout Japanese men being forward was cute specially when i keep thinking maybe it crushed his confidence a little ...kk maybe a lot but wat u wrote was still cute nd i liked it it gives us a little info on him that tell us maybe hes shy? anyway her ex? cnt believe he did that nd then trying 2 play it out saying that he just wanted to be friends but thats what they all say but the truth is they want 2 get back 2gether nd the same thing happend 2 her mother how could get a woman pregnant nd leave his wife wat hes been with through thick nd thin just to leave cnt believe that still i need some inside of the story first but still i feel said cuz...anyway plz update soon i cnt wait 4 more XD

the first chapter sounds intresting nd i cnt wait 2 c their relationship develop into sumfink more XD oh nd i must say i love the video wat u made 4 this story nd i cnt wait for more updates on this story nd ur other 1 called Ki fashions the story line is great the video 2 it specially seeing the mother hitting the son hes pretty XD nd the girl i love her i watched her Tv show when i was young so ya thats it cnt wait 4 more updates plz update soon XD

I'm so happy for an update! I really do hate hiroshi, what an asshole. I do feel like the ending was way to abrupt, like it just stopped in the middle of a conversation. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I can't wait to see what happens next!

loved it! pls put up the rest..

update this one too

This is good. we havent got to the plot yet but I hope she doesnt take the ofer of dating boys. Plus what is her race that gets her strange looks? And when are you going to get descriptions?

hmmn interesting, nice chap.

update please