Reviews for Alive
moongazer7 chapter 1 . 12/14/2008
Pretty good, but perhaps you might discribe the street. How the cars halted or whatever they could be doing. This way it’s all pretty together. Readers will imagine it more clearly, and I am sure you want to paint a clear picture.
Asphodel21 chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
Hey, not bad! This is a very good one! In fact, I truly believe it to be your best man! D D D

Continue writing! D