OMG you sure know how to keep the surprises coming

wtf omg I did not expect that :-O

Hey! Love the story! Pleaseeeeee finish it here. Im dying for them to get together.

Are you gonna finish it at all? PLEASE DO!

Are you ever going to finish this story? Or write the actual one? Or tell us any of your decisions? Cause i've been waiting an awful long time..

okay, so I am confused if u don't usually post the last chapter then where can I read it because I am desperatly waiting for it, please tell me! PLEASE!

Im really sad! U can't end it next chapterthere is too much that has to happen! And Jake and isabel better get together and live happily ever after! Other then that great job I love this story! And I'm sad it's almost over!

i love it! i only started reading your story a couple of days ago and was sorely disappointed when i read that you regularly don't post your final chapter, although i do understand your reasoning. but i am very glad to hear that you will be posting it as there will be a lot happening in the next chapter! i can't wait! you are a very talented writer

OMFG ! NO! :(

cant wait till the next chapter!

I like Penny's idea. An announcement along the lines of: "The decision was made by a member outside the Veggan court and under the duress of the king's passing. It was a hasty decision by a man only trying to help lessen the grief. We apologize for any inconvenience. Repercussions will be dealt with accordingly."

~Sincerely, Vegga

Loved this chapter, Katelyn! So glad you're going to post the last chapter (but even if you didn't I'd somehow get into your room and steal your fish until you gave it to me). I love that Jake's fighting, but I still would have LOVED to see Isabel wake up and throw Erik off a cliff or something. That would have been epic. ) Very nice - ONE more chapter! YOU CAN DO IT!

[Dang review didn't give you the rest so here it is, I'll just have to make the review for Chap 2 and 3 together] I would think he wouldn’t say something as kiddish as that..it just doesn’t suit his personality, and I really think that part would be stronger if you just took it out. xD But that’s my opinion of course and it’s your story. xD Others may think differently.

Let’s see. For all the good descriptions and absolutely wonderful verbs that you have that really flesh out a scene, I noticed a few instances where you like to tack the word “had” in front of them. Like at the beginning, for example, when you wrote, “Neither had blinked yet, neither had wielded to defeat.” Sometimes those “had” verbs really, really weaken the main one. If you take them out they strengthen your sentence by a whole damn lot. xD I saw it a few times throughout, but that’s just a style thing I guess, so if you prefer to keep them, keep them. I only think that sometimes it would strengthen your sentences if you took them out. xD

Other than that, God, I love your writing. xD It’s so fun. Can’t wait to read the rest. Expect more reviews when I get the time. I promise you and Emily will get lots of my attention review wise because I’m deprived of good writing right now. –headdesk- Damn classes that I took…not a single one has anything to do with creative writing. xD

My God. xD I just need to say now that you are a genius when it comes to humor. There were quite a few moments in here when all the drama that was actually going on was countered so effectively with humor. It really seriously was a great way to start a story. xD I nearly died when Dirk told Rogers that it was easy for him to consider a year so little in the long run, because he didn’t have that many left. xDD I love your sense of sarcasm, which leads me to another point.

Your dialogue? It flows so well. It’s amazing how much of the characters you put into what they say. It’s extremely effective and I’m already sorely attached to every single one of them now. xD Very good characterizations here. Love it to death. One part that I got iffy about though, with dialogue concerns was with Jake in the beginning when he said, “Ugh, it’s so dumb!” I can understand a teenager saying that perhaps, but I felt as if it was a little out of character for him. xD Somewhat more childish than it should have been and less real. I think part of it is because he’s the son of a General, and at 19 years (I think that was his age right?

:D I can't wait for Jake's reaction to this...FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! :D :D :D love it

AH! that is like the mother load of clif hangers! AH! If i weren't so sleep deprived right now i would totally rant more! you need to update this awesome story, if you don't some bad will happen to you like in those stupid forwards that are stupid!