Reviews for Chilled Dreams
ode to melancholy chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
I think I like this new style of yours... Or love it. :D
Narq chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
ouch... beatifully icy

Narq.
Air Rey chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
It's gripping, haunting, and disturbing, but I love it. It capture a good view of unending love. Your use of images is astounding especially the first images you created of someone somehow or somewhat touching a dead body. It's amazing. Although, some points sound a bit melodramatic. In general, the poem is good! Good job!
dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
I like the direction you're heading in with the italics because it gives a lot of meaning to those words. However, I do think you went a tad overboard and it got distracting after a while.

My favorite lines were "as the sugarglazed doughnuts/that caught in your throat;" I like the phrasing; it's interesting and unique.

Nice work :)
Ernest Bloom chapter 1 . 11/6/2008
this is funny; i like the addition reaction and imagine the vulnerability of an exposed pi-bond.