Reviews for He was Cool
Elephant Hunter chapter 3 . 1/5/2014
Why are you leaving me with only this?! It was great!
*cries* I wanted to read it! WAHHHH!
But, seriously, awesome story! I loved the idea, I hope you get time to finish it!
Love-Comes-In-Many-Forms chapter 3 . 5/2/2011
Why don't you post it, but then re-write the whole thing? If these are the original firs chapters I'd love to see the rest of the story. Because what you claim to be sucky is probably actually really good. A writer almost ALWAYS disses/dislikes his/her writing. I knw I do, but people say that it's good so why shouldn't I believe them? Just post it back up PLEASE!
PenmanshipSmitten88 chapter 3 . 12/28/2010
well from what I've read in the first three chapters, it is pretty good.

I think that you should continue it. I like the character Frankie...

Maybe you should work on the characterisation of Hayden...

Yeah thats it...
LauraBerry chapter 3 . 11/30/2010
So good! More? :))
Mandyg chapter 2 . 11/25/2010
This is going to be a great story.

Why does it say complete.

Please update soon.


WinterInk24 chapter 2 . 11/22/2010
Hehe. Hayden is funny. I can't wait for more awkward situations between him and Allie. Also wondering if this story is actually completed. That would make me very sad to never know what kind of revenge Hayden has in store. Great writing. Great characters. They all have a distinct personality. Update soon please! :D
XxDragon-TwinsxX chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
I love this story

even if it only has two chapters so far...

anyways, I hope you update quickly!
SeaJade Song chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
i think its pretty rockish! (anything with an ish for me makes it better just saying)
Crankygal chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
Hi i chance upon this story and it is very gd just by looking at chapter one, did you take it down? Is there anyway you will repost the story please?


Nell09 chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
umm I really like what I ve read so far but I can only see 1 chapter posted and its not looking like its completed so I m wondering whether its only 1 ch or not, great charecters!
A Kiss in the Dreamhouse chapter 4 . 1/26/2010
They have to earn 5 K! Wow that's going to be tough!
A Kiss in the Dreamhouse chapter 3 . 1/26/2010
Oh exciting! And Im really loving all the characters!
A Kiss in the Dreamhouse chapter 2 . 1/26/2010
HAHA her dog has the same name!
A Kiss in the Dreamhouse chapter 1 . 1/26/2010
I love Frankie, she is so cute!
Vicky A chapter 24 . 1/2/2010
Are we going to read a sequal in the near future? With the possibility of Julian being the main character, perhaps?
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