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Why are you leaving me with only this?! It was great!
*cries* I wanted to read it! WAHHHH!
But, seriously, awesome story! I loved the idea, I hope you get time to finish it!

Why don't you post it, but then re-write the whole thing? If these are the original firs chapters I'd love to see the rest of the story. Because what you claim to be sucky is probably actually really good. A writer almost ALWAYS disses/dislikes his/her writing. I knw I do, but people say that it's good so why shouldn't I believe them? Just post it back up PLEASE!

well from what I've read in the first three chapters, it is pretty good.

I think that you should continue it. I like the character Frankie...

Maybe you should work on the characterisation of Hayden...

Yeah thats it...

So good! More? :))

This is going to be a great story.

Why does it say complete.

Please update soon.

Thanks

Mandy

Hehe. Hayden is funny. I can't wait for more awkward situations between him and Allie. Also wondering if this story is actually completed. That would make me very sad to never know what kind of revenge Hayden has in store. Great writing. Great characters. They all have a distinct personality. Update soon please! :D

I love this story

even if it only has two chapters so far...

anyways, I hope you update quickly!

i think its pretty rockish! (anything with an ish for me makes it better just saying)

Hi i chance upon this story and it is very gd just by looking at chapter one, did you take it down? Is there anyway you will repost the story please?

Thanks

Crankygal

umm I really like what I ve read so far but I can only see 1 chapter posted and its not looking like its completed so I m wondering whether its only 1 ch or not, great charecters!

They have to earn 5 K! Wow that's going to be tough!

Oh exciting! And Im really loving all the characters!

HAHA her dog has the same name!

I love Frankie, she is so cute!

Are we going to read a sequal in the near future? With the possibility of Julian being the main character, perhaps?