Reviews for He was Cool
JadeDream chapter 15 . 2/24/2009
ugh Allie and Hayden are so cute together! she needs to tell him how she feels! lol, cant wait to read the next chapter, update soon!
LogicandStuff chapter 15 . 2/24/2009
Love the story! Waited forever to review because Fictionpress was going berserk! Can't wait until the next chapter!
Stahlut chapter 15 . 2/24/2009
Read this chapter a few days ago, but stupid fiction press wouldn't let me review, so here goes. It's kind of funny that she knows but doesn't want to say anything, though it is kind of understandable. And I am seriously wondering what he's been up to, I mean what does he get out of anything that has happened.
twilight24 chapter 15 . 2/21/2009
OMG I loved this chapter! And I love Hayden! ;) Yes, he does have his jrek moments and there certainly are a lot of secrets that he's keeping, but I think it's cuz he's ust really hurt inside. Something happened to make him that way, and acting like a jerk is just a defense or wall he puts up just so that the hurt inside of him doesnt he needed an old friend to help him and thts why he chose llie to pretend-date him. Do I make sense?

And about the whole Frankie issue...i dont think she's all as bad as the rumors make her out to be, but there is something wrong with her...I just cant figure out wat it is.

But yeah, this is one of my favorite stories on here right now. I absolutely LOVE it! Update soon! :)
Frenchyesca chapter 15 . 2/21/2009
:O Oh snap. :)

Ahh the whole entire 'a couple of turns and the finish line' thing made me think of XC, therefore showing how much running has come to dominate my life. Thanks. *Groans*

Quite exciting!
kikichaka chapter 15 . 2/21/2009
This chapter is the best
CutieSOS chapter 15 . 2/21/2009
this is awsome

this storys got me guessing

ya kno

keep up the good work

luv this story
confessions chapter 15 . 2/21/2009
OMG! The suspense is killing me... When is she going to tell him she knows? I can't believe she fell for Hayden.. I mean he has his good moments, but he is usually a jerk... And why did he ask her out.. The secrets are killing me. Update soon.
pamperedwitch chapter 15 . 2/21/2009
I LOVE IT

I officially love Hayden more than Julian

And I love the bet.

I cannot wait for more
AngelReader chapter 14 . 2/15/2009
omigawd continue PLEASE!

this is AWESOME!

what i don't understand is, if Julian and Samuel stuck together for so long, then why did they hate each other?

it's kinda confusing

but i LOVE the suspense

though, PLEASE continue

i LVOE LOVE LOVE it ]
cajun-cuteness chapter 14 . 2/12/2009
O! I kinda knew the Hayden-Samuel thing, but I SO did not see the Frankie-pregnant thing coming. I mean WOW!
notyourbiz chapter 14 . 2/9/2009
ooh im in love wit a story!its freakin its awesome. lolz love it like major turn around with julian and did hayden/sameul kno wat she was talkin about or did he just leave cuz she wasnt coperating please update really soon
Pepper Ann Square chapter 14 . 2/8/2009
thanks for the update although it was pretty short but at least you updated. can't wait for the next chapter. i'm dying to know the reason why Hayden didn't tell Allie he was or is Samuel. :)
twilight24 chapter 14 . 2/8/2009
OMG, I wanna read more! Aw, I hope everything between her and Hayden works out well. Hayden's rly been growing on me even w/ his slight weirdness.

And Frankie! I knew something like this would happen when she started going out w/ Colten.
pamperedwitch chapter 14 . 2/8/2009
Aw poor Frankie! I feel bad for her.

Can't wait for more

and hearing its towards the end kinda makes me both happy and sad. Strange but its okay

hehe
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