Reviews for He was Cool
pamperedwitch chapter 10 . 1/3/2009
Sorry it's taken me so long to review. I was away for the holidays. And its great to have 2 whole chapters to come home to!

it was awesome as usual. I'm starting to like Julian better than hayden *le gasp!* And this is going to stay short cause I'm off to read the next chapter ]
xiia0moonlight chapter 11 . 12/29/2008
is hayden and julian related ?
Counting Luv Toxic Stars chapter 11 . 12/26/2008
aww that wuz cute, for a sec there i thought she was going to go running with him into the pool lol
meduse chapter 11 . 12/26/2008
This chapter was so cute D

THEY KISSED! YAY!

lol i'm such a freak...I really really really like Hayden...

But I don't know about Julian...he seems like a nice guy...

And what about Samuel? Is he going to come into the story?

Anyway, I'll wait for the next chapter!

~DixieAusten
ROsEDgr8 chapter 11 . 12/25/2008
heY!MERRY CHRISTMAS tO u & UR wHOLe FAmilY

tHE stORY iS AWESoME so KEEp wRITINg...
twilight24 chapter 11 . 12/24/2008
OMG, I actually like Hayden now! He seems all mysterious and just ...wonderful!

What's he hiding under his shirt? I mean like is there something wrong w/ him? Idk, I just thought that was kinda weird when he looked like he had a problem w/ it.

But, WOW!, I can tell this is going to be a REALLY good story.
JadeDream chapter 11 . 12/23/2008
a new obstacle? aww dont tell me Haydens gonna go back to being a jerk! eww i dont like Frankie...and Josh is ok i guess lol...update soon!
poppiesinoctober chapter 11 . 12/23/2008
Okay, so I just finished what you have, and I must say I like it. I mean, it's kind of hard to understand though. There's parts where I get totally lost, cause it's just different. I don't know, I think you could make things clearer. But anyway, um, I don't have much more to say right now. I like it. Update when ya cann.
Jazzisabatmanfan chapter 11 . 12/23/2008
Awesome, Hayden is showing his softer side, but what's up with Frankie? Anywho, great chapter.
telly chapter 11 . 12/23/2008
OH MY GOD! Hayden is her's and Julian's childhood friend she used to hate. I mean seriously the...“You remind me of someone. We always fought over skittles but he always left the purple ones behind. He told me he hated it the most but he'll eat it all when he ate with Julian.”... gave it off so easily. I hope she ends up with Hayden
cajun-cuteness chapter 11 . 12/23/2008
XD

You procrastinator!

LOL. This was so good! I mean finally they kiss! And now can feel better about not thinking Hayden as an ass.
gnud chapter 11 . 12/23/2008
i so love your story and i can't wait for the next chapter. could it be that hayden is the kid of her childhood?
florations chapter 10 . 12/20/2008
well, all i can say is .. wow. ;D great story tho it still is unfinished, and you know what's funny ? [to me, i mean. i am so corny. lol. ;D] whenever hayden's name [the person no the doggie. :O] Edward Cullen's picture comes in my mind. ;D you know, the one in twilight? the hot vampire? lol! cos' they are so alike. and yea, i found it weird. so anywhoo, ;D update fast! i'm gonna be waiting.~~ lol. TEAM HAYDEN. :D

~ April
cajun-cuteness chapter 10 . 12/20/2008
COME ON!

That is the WORST chapter preview EVER!

Cliff hangers SUCK!

Come ON. Update! PLEASE!

*sobs and curls up in bed crying*
Kirby chapter 10 . 12/20/2008
Wow absolutely intriguing. Can not wait to read more.
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