| Reviews for He was Cool |
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   JadeDream chapter 10 . 12/20/2008 ooh...tell me its Hayden in the preview for the next chapter! lol update son! |
| Counting Luv Toxic Stars chapter 10 . 12/20/2008 oh gosh, i was kind of confused, but that's my fault for reading to fast, the next chapter preview kind of scares me, i hope she isn't going to kiss some other guy, i really want her with Hayden because I seem both of them changing their ways for the other |
| pamperedwitch chapter 9 . 12/19/2008 O taylor swift. hehe I love that song! But that is so not the point of a review. Once again...I LOVE it. And i have to say I kinda actually like hayden again. But i also like julian. So I'll two-time with you. Cuase they are both awesome! |
| Pepper Ann Square chapter 9 . 12/19/2008 nice story. and you update real fast. that's great! :) keep up the good work... |
| Counting Luv Toxic Stars chapter 9 . 12/19/2008 ha, i luv the song love story... aww i'm starting to luv Hayden, i luv how allie and hayden are both changing and adjusting slowly around each other, keep up the good work ] |
| cajun-cuteness chapter 9 . 12/19/2008 Luv taylor swift. LUV HER. I'm listening to check yes juliet right now... LOL. I actually like Hayden now... JULIEN ROX THOUGH! |
| Jazzisabatmanfan chapter 9 . 12/19/2008 Awesomeness, I knew Hayden wasn't that bad of a guy. Great chapter. |
| Katie Saychiadu chapter 1 . 12/19/2008 I'm hoping to over you some advice rather than "critizing" your work! I noticed two things: 1. You switch betwene past and present tense a lot. I have a nasty habit of doing this too, so I like when people point it out to me. 2. Your dialogue/conversations are just lines said by... no one. Okay, I'm not retarded, so I figured out who was saying what, but it's nice to have "A quote," Name said. Or whatever. Get what I mean? Other than that, you've written a chapter that has piqued my interest. And I liked your first author's note. If you're like Frankie, God help you! LOL Good job! |
| sam chapter 1 . 12/19/2008 i read your summary, and this story sounds like kmovie, he was cool. not original, tsk tsk |
| ROsEDgr8 chapter 9 . 12/19/2008 Hey! Iam really lovin the SToRY...KeeP wrITin,gUD wORk.. But I hOPe EVeryTHIn GOes RighT BetWEEn FRAnkiE & AlliE.. :) THAnx So MUCh...! [rOZy] |
| JadeDream chapter 9 . 12/19/2008 (i feel bad i didnt review the last chapter...but i had finals) Anyway! Im liking Hayden lol...i hope everything works out with Allie and Frankie though! Update soon, cant wait to read more! |
| sooner or later its over chapter 9 . 12/19/2008 love hayden :) |
| sooner or later its over chapter 8 . 12/19/2008 ha ha i love to hate hayden his last text was hillarious |
| Violet Thelaw chapter 3 . 12/18/2008 I love the part about Melissa! it was a frank and funny introduction. :D |
| Violet Thelaw chapter 2 . 12/18/2008 Great chapter! Although I think you could add a few lines? :D It seems like there's something missing...but my thoughts still won't change. Cute story! |