Reviews for Key Words
fivesandsevens chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
This peice, makes me want to scream

"Break my heart so that

I may be free from this pain!"

But I am already broken

And my pain has yet to stop

I don know if it never will.

I feel your pain stix.
K. Molle chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
wow intense; almost thought this was my friends poem for a moment. She wrote one about her life and it sounded very similar to this. Very well captured and you tied in the coarse language so it fit into what you wanted to say. Good stuff.
pixy dust and fairytales chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
I like this piece, very good. Keep it up.