Reviews for Bloody Bird
ISpeltEclipseWrong chapter 1 . 8/21/2013
I really liked this piece, I could clearly see the imagery and actually cringed in sympathy at some of your descriptions. Poor guy, he seemed pretty cool giving us knowledge and all that. You get punished very easily in mythology, it's like 'You breathed wrong! HELL!'
Night21Loki chapter 1 . 2/26/2009
Nice. I've been thinking about trying to write a story about one of the punished by a Mythical God, but all attempts have failed *sigh*, I liked this one. It was very truthful (bugs do come eat you ...though i don't know why. They must just be attracted to dead stuff! Joking, yeah I'm terrible at that too. _

And so I bid thee adieu (sp?)

-Night21Loki (yells at Loki 'No you may NOT join the evil bird!')
Anita Tseu chapter 1 . 1/13/2009
Great job )
cancelledout chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
Nicely narrated. Reading it was enjoyable. )