|Reviews for Fade to Black, a Monologue|
| Masked Truth chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
This is good, I mean really good.
I'd just like to see more. It's really short for a monologue. There's so much more background you could give on both the him and the her. There's so much more story that needs to be told.
The last paragraph was beautiful. Just put more in it. I know you can. Good luck.
| Leisie93 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Wow! Really great monologue! The idea is a little but cliched, but it is VERY well written. I can't wait to read more!
| deletethisaccountplease9 chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
curse you and your spectacular writing abilities! lol now that I have vented my frustration about not being nearly as good a writer as you are I can get down to reviewing!
I liked the opening, and the flashback to when he was cutting himself, and loved the rain motif that infused the whole thing. The last line of the last paragraph though... did it get cut off? It didnt seem to fit w/ the rest of it, and .ne doesnt make sense haha!