|Reviews for Hourglass|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/30/2008
"on the canvas in blank of a picture"... I don't think blank is the right word because it kind of doesn't make sense.
The rest of it is nice. It connects together well with the painting and the leaves.
| Unique1952 chapter 1 . 11/24/2008
This is very good. I think that this piece could possibly be one of my favorite poems from you. I feel that I can really relate to this, which is probably why I like it so much. I think its sweet, but with an eerie sadness that adds to the charm of this poem. Once again, this piece is really good and I look forward to reading more from you.
| May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
Again. Very relatable. Peace.
| Erlkoenigin chapter 1 . 11/10/2008
I can only agree to the other reviewers: a wonderful poem. I like the line “to those simple days”, that connects the beginning of the poem with the end.
| Qzie chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
It's such a beautiful, nostalgic poem. The recurring themes of autumn and the canvas and pictures worked wonderfully. Very smooth transitions from how things were when you were young, then to how things are now, then right back to the general feeling of being young. :)
| Isca chapter 1 . 11/8/2008
"This autumn is more silent than ever." Beautiful! :)
I loved the parts near the end that mentioned the Angels, the sad smiles, the falling leaves, feathers, wings, etc.
Keep up the good work! :)