|Reviews for Mother's Touch|
| Isca chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
"Reaching for my heart again." I like the angsty tone of this line. I also like the 'knife wound' imagery and your vivid descriptions: aching, grinding, reaching, etc.
"I don't even remember it." This line is quite striking. The speaker first explains, in detail, this woman's hold on her, and then proceeds to say that she can't remember it at all. Perhaps she's 'numb' inside or prone to 'repression.' Interesting concept.
"She is disgusted by my scars." The tone of this line is hard-hitting and emotionally raw. Wow.
Keep up the good work!
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| Time To Change chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
poignant and tragic.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Oh wow tragic poem. I'm sorry to hear about this. Always be positive and keep writing. Well written poem!