|Reviews for august|
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
I really like all the color references in the beginning. They worked well and they painted a great picture for the reader. I also like you're word choices, some of them were really perfect (for example briny). Nice job.
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| poetic heretic chapter 1 . 11/9/2008
Wonderful imagery! Such a sad, sad piece...I love it! I would pick a favorite line, but they're all so beautiful and powerful that I love them all! Poetry like this inspires me to write, so thank you. )
Keep writing...or else!