Reviews for Of Apples and Trees
nevershoutnever chapter 23 . 4/27/2009
FANTASTIC.

I just finished read the phone call series is so cool.

It took me like a whole 2days to finish everything.

You should keep writing about them.

There life's are so interesting. . . is your life like that are you dating a rockstar or and NFL player OR OR SUPERMAN.

'cause that would be of the hook . . .

well continue the series think of something I think the whole things great. :)

-RAE
Katie chapter 23 . 4/14/2009
This story made me cry so many times! As someone who never knew her real father, the story line hits really close to home. It was written really well, and although parts were a little bit rushed, and perhaps there could have been fewer characters/more character development, it is definitely a story that the author should be very proud of.

This, quite honestly, will be remembered in the future as one of my favorite stories, thank you for producing such a fabulous creation!
BlueberryMuffinMonster chapter 23 . 4/13/2009
this is the most cutest story ever !
quackerrox chapter 23 . 4/12/2009
ah, i loved your story. i was laughing so much at some parts. your an amazing writer. :D
The Dumbing Down Of Love chapter 23 . 3/9/2009
Ending was way too happyhappy, but awesome story anyway D

Not too cliche, for something in Romance P
KarmaC chapter 23 . 3/3/2009
This was absolutely wonderful. I'm a hopeless romantic, so this story was MADE for me. RJ is the most perfect man created. LOVE HIM! Cass is so lucky! I can't wait to read more stuff from you!
TemptedByLaNuit chapter 23 . 2/28/2009
Aw, *very* cute! The nickname of 'Bug' was absolutely adorable. :)

I've gotta say, I've become very fond of your stories - I've already read quite a few of them, and just handed the link to this story over to a friend of mine. You're awesome. :)
doveofdreams chapter 23 . 2/27/2009
Ok, I am absolutely obssessed with these characters. I can't wait for the next "adventure" from them.

And you made a comment a couple of chapters ago about Back to the Top is Jake's POV and you not wanting to post it. I understand that it might be a personal thing, but could you consider posting it, because I would love to read it!

Matt and Greta sounds like a great idea too. That would give us readers a look at Jake without Iz and I have been wondering what was going through Matt's head as he was falling in love with Greta.
MAYA chapter 23 . 2/20/2009
oH EMM GEE[LOL] i love you rockfan! your books are A-MAZING. SERIOUSLY. i was hoping this series would never end. i sort of fell in love with the characters and it was all plain lovely. My faveourite characters were Jake and Isabella and i love phone calls from a rockstar and back to the top.

keep on writing and i hope you get better and better and when you get published remmeber the little people from fictionpress who loved you before all the glamour. HEHE.

x BYE x
angie chapter 23 . 2/8/2009
pls update great story
drowningintears7o7 chapter 11 . 1/28/2009
Hey, I'm new to this whole fictionpress thing; I don't even have an account (yet). But I really wanted to say a few things about your stories. First off, I really like them. They're totally addicting. I keep telling myself I'll read a chapter before doing my homework, but that turns into two chapters, then three, and before I know it I've read the whole story. I've been holding off on sending in a review, but I noticed something in here I just couldn't stop from pointing out. You changed from Hannah Montana to Hailee Marie, but you said Hannah Montana in this chapter. I really thought this was something that you'd like to know, since you said you didn't want to get into any problems for using her in your story.

There are a couple other things that I've been wanting to point out that have kind of bothered me in all your stories. The first is one of your punctuation styles. You will have some dialogue like this:

"blah blah blah," he asked.

It should really have a question mark inside the quotation marks instead of the comma. This isn't a really big deal, but since I tend to read with an editor's eye, it keeps jumping out at me.

The other thing that I wanted to mention was how you described something. All the female characters have strawberry scented hair. Even when you say they smell different than the other girls, they still have strawberry scented hair. I meant to go back and find this chapter and comment on it, but I keep forgetting to, but in one of your stories (I think it's the one about Robbie, because I think it was about Sam) you changed this. In the beginning of the chapter she had vanilla scented hair, and this made me happy because her scent actually WAS different, just like it was supposed to. But then at the end of the chapter she had strawberry scented hair. That might have just been a mistake, though.

I really like your stories, and I can't wait to read more of them (I'm still working on this series, then I'll move on to your other stories). They have great writing and great ideas, as well as well thought out plot lines. A little work could make them absolutely amazing! I sincerely hope you are able to go somewhere with your writings. They're good enough for you to be able to do so.

-drowningintears7o7 (I'm on quizilla)
A.K.A. Writer's Block chapter 23 . 1/24/2009
Oh my god.

Babies and children.

My heart nearly BROKE with how adorable Bug was, and with how much RJ loved her... Oh, my god. This was... oh, wow.

I guess that, as a teenage female, I WOULD think that babies and children are the ULTIMATE piece of awesome in the world...

Oh, wow.

FANTASTIC story.

-aka
lunakmerry chapter 23 . 1/20/2009
Hi! I don't think i've ever reviewed any of your stories before, despite the fact i've read all of them (sorry) This story made me want to review though, it made me laugh, cry and get really excited! You're a pretty amazing author, keep doing what you're doing! - Dannielle
Rachel L chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
So I didn't know where to put this request because honestly it could be in any of your stories, but I'm making a request for a Matt and Greta story. Greta is so adorable with her crush on Matt in Doing Whatever It Takes and ever since the brief insight to how her and Matt get together in Back To The Top, I have wanted you to write their story. I know you probably have lots of requests and I will happily read anything you write, but I really want to dive into the world of Matt and Greta. I absolutely ADORE your stories. I have read all of them in the past 3 days. I've stayed up late every night trying to finish a story and wake up first thing to start another. I am very captured up in all the characters and their lives. They feel so real and I feel like I actually know them. Your writing style is fun and an easy read that makes any lazy afternoon enjoyable. Keep pursuing your writing and maybe one day the entire Phone Calls series will be published. Hopefully because I would certainly buy all of them. :)
anonomoose2 chapter 11 . 12/20/2008
great story :-)
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