Reviews for Of Apples and Trees |
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![]() ![]() ![]() if it was a little rushed, you definitely made up for it in the sweetness of the chapter. I know they're not real people, but the interaction is amazing and so sweet! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love your writing...please don't stop. the rock fan series is an all time fav |
![]() ![]() ![]() “He wants to marry you but I think he’s too scared to ask you so he asked me to ask you.” RJ groaned and closed his eyes. “That’s not what I told you to say.” “I forgot what you told me to say,” Natalie said. Thats soo cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was definitely the most adorable story i have ever read in my entire life! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw that was perfect. I cracked up so hard when you wrote “I showed everyone my missing tooth and Uncle Jake gave me five dollars and Uncle Matt gave me five dollars and Uncle Nick gave me five dollars. But Grandpa gave me ten dollars.” I'm going to go back and reread Phone Call for like the 5th time. I miss those guys. They're adorable. Anyway, I want to say you did an amazing job on your stories and you're the only author I've read every single piece of writing. I'm usually kinda picky, but I'm in love with your writing. Please continue with something soon! :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh noes ;_; This was a really good finish, and I love how everyone stayed with their personalities the whole way through. I can't wait to see what story you come up with next, I'm sure it'll be just as great as this lot was. Good job~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! good job as always! I can't wait to read more from you! Is this the end of phone calls series? I might cry if it is. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story as usual! Can't wait to see what you have up your sleeve next! xoxo jennie |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can't believe it's finished! I'm going to miss it! I honestly wake up and read this in the morning because I know you always do daily update! But anyways, just a suggestion on what you can write about! Maybe a one-shot of Ally giving birth to her son, I'd like to know how everybody reacts and Ally's reaction to her having a baby boy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the ending - yes it was rushed but that's OK! I love your stories and always look forward to reading them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww so cutee! i loved it! |
![]() ![]() LOL! "That's not what I told you to say." Hahah how cute! I forgot about Jamie and Sophie's wedding! Silly me. Yay for the engagement though! :DD. Hahaha I totally love Ally. She's pretty badass. LOVED this story! Just like all of your stories. I just get sucked in. Can't wait for your next one whatever it might be! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! (Yeah, we're back to that. LoL). What a perfect ending. I thought it all went a little fast there last chapter, (there was real potential for the Whitley's to argue that RJ had tried to blackmail Elise into giving him custody), but i'm glad nonetheless that Elise did the right thing. The puppy was a great touch. Jamie finally got married! Yay! And Ally had a boy. I knew she would. LoL. I loved the part about everyone giving Nat money for her tooth. And when Nat told Cass that RJ was too scared to ask her to marry him himself. LoL. Perfect! Overall, i thought this story was mostly a success. If you ever rewrite, i'd suggest a little less Nat/RJ at the beginning (perhaps you could put somethings together in chapters, or cut the really redundant stuff, not that there's a lot of that anyway), and more of the legal stuff at the end. OR you could just make the story longer in general. It's all important. I like the sound of a Christmas story with all these characters. Look forward to it. Congrats on completing an amazing story! ~LK1512~ |
![]() ![]() Thanks to Elise that went by pretty quick. We're not gonna read about her officially dieing are we? :(. Would definately love to read about RJ and Cassidy's wedding! Perhaps a 2 years later kinda thing? With Ally and Cole's baby popped out and everything! Haha just dreaming. Anywho I should go read the next chapter Poor Elise.. Yay for Bug! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I'm going to cry. Really. It's over, and everyone was so happy. *cries* They are tears of joy of course. Ohmygod. Jamie's married. Ally & Cole have a baby. RJ is engaged. There's only one word I can say about all of those things: YAY! :P hahaha. LOVE this part: She’d agree, he was sure. Almost positive. Nearly certain. Not so sure at all. This story is pretty much tied with Phone Calls and Sacked In The Backfield as my favorites in the whole series. A-MAZING! As usual. :D |