i'm in love with this story! :o)

*Sam

aw. RJ! That's so...IDK...when the spool spun out of control... *tear*. That was really sweet though, Ally letting him cry on her "shoulder". & Cole stepping out to give them privacy. *sigh*

LMAO. YES! The "posh" hotel in Idaho. lol. Taking credit for something they didn't do... shame shame. :P

LOL. I'm sorry, I hope you forgive me when I say this but... I kind of... might of... had the sudden urge to slap Cassidy. lol. I'm SORRY! But...When she said, "Is that why you think I slept with you last night?” and then w/e after that... I was like: *slap* GET YOURSELF TOGETHER WOMAN! *shake by shoulders* Of course that's not what he thinks! *grins* See... it was more of a friendly, 'calm down' slap.

Jamie! *hugs* :D

I don't want to add more to the confusion but...Cassidy is a bit older than RJ, right? I think I read that in one of the chapters. Either that, or I made it up. Hmm. Maybe I shouldn't have brought it up. (sorry)

Hm... whatever/whenever your next story is... it should start with this sentence... "Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before." LOL. Just kidding!

Ok, I guess I understand where Mr. Whitley is coming from, but he has no right to take away someone's daughter just because he wants to make up for being a bad father. It's disgusting. Umm... it was a really good chapter, I love it. On to what you said in the A/N. It would be cool to see an Abby story, but it's not that big of a deal for me. A Matt and Greta story would be great, I've wanted that since I first read Back to the Top. Ronnie and Carly would be cool too... it would be nice to get to know the parents of my favorite character a little better. The one about all of the boys of Controlled Environment as they start out and make it would rock... I would LOVE to read that. Umm... I really wish you would post Back to the Top in Jake's POV, because that's my favorite story out of all of them but, of course, you don't have to. And I think stories for Ryan and Tyler would be really cool. Especially Tyler, to see how he's dealing with the after effects of his stroke. Well, please update ASAP! Later.

~ Malice

damn that Elise poor Cass. I love it, if you do happen to writ Jakes POV for one would love to read it

This is so wonderful! Please update soon. I miss Bug so much...

Interesting developments...I don't see how RJ can't get custody since he's the biological father. These people are the ones who are kidnapping Natalie. I'd love to see her have a full-out hissy-fit and cling to RJ, refusing to let him go. I've dealt with subborn kids in the past and it is HARD to get them to do something if they don't want to do it. I also think she's probably scared to death. being taken from Cassidy and RJ so abruptly like that. Talk about traumatic. I really hope she's giving her "grandparents" a hard time.

As for a future story, I would love another Cole/Ally story since he's my favorite of your guy characters. Perhaps set it a little into the future and have them as parents to pre-teens or teens. Start another generation! Whatever you do, I'm sure it will be good. Keep writing!

wow is he serious? Just because you didn't raise your daughter well does not mean you can take someone elses... Man anyway great chapter.

I like your ideas on what to write next, I would read any of them. I like the idea of seeing Nick's story especially his whole feelings on Iz thing and how the others got together. :-)

aw in Jake's POV? That's neat, good luck. :-)

2 chapters! You're spoiling us and I love it.

What angst you put us through. I can't wait to see them all happy together.

As for your new chapters, about about something completely new? You've wrote about all the main characters, so maybe you'll get some inspiration with something new..

Aw, I really wanted to see RJ and Bug. Will we see them next cahpter? They're so cute together!

AH! You can't leave off there, we want to see bug! post soon!

Do whatever, me wills love it.

Can't wait to read the next chapter! Continue! ]

You should try to do something entirely new. Here's some ideas I know you'd be great at that you haven't yet tried. Let me know what you think!

1. A millionaire's son is a player in the sense that he is a - addict. But when he falls in love with the shy timid girl, how will he learn to keep it in his pants?

2. A hard-working woman with two 4-year old twin boys and a two year old little girl is struggling to pay the bills. Then she gets in a car accident, hitting the Bentley of multi-billionaire developer who's as cold as his cold hard cash. But they end up changing each other's lives.

I have plenty more ideas...just look at my profile. I always have ideas but can never go through with them so I'd love to see you do something like that.

Anyways, I'm out of the hospital now and I realize you hardly have time with your job now, so I'd like to beta for you or be a sounding board. Let me know! You're the best!

anielle (aka, the former )

Whew, I'm so glad that he's getting to see Natalie finally. Poor Cass ... I'll bet she's out of her mind. Can't wait for the next chapter!

i love this story, deffo better then your first altho i miss dj. im feeling all nervous lol even no i no its all going to be ok. have you thought bout doing matt and gretas story, or caly and ronnies? maybe nick and cole like him meeting cole the first time etc, if you dont have enough ideas for full stories you culd do one shots. maybe when iz had adam. or how about ally finding out she is pregnant and telling cole and then them telling their parents lol