Reviews for Of Apples and Trees |
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![]() ![]() Loved it. One error (and it's minor): "You're mom" should be "Your mom" down near the bottom. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay for fluff. : ) They're such a cute little couple. I'm bracing for the drama! |
![]() ![]() ![]() “Well, are you interested in meeting someone?” the caller persisted. “Like, me or my friends?” haha. She wishes... I do too. lol. Super cute that he bought them matching (?) bracelets! aw. I kind of want one. :( How exciting, their date! ah! Can't. Wait! :D |
![]() ![]() ahh i really love all your stories! this one is so cute and the relationship between rj and natalie is so much fun to read. i also love how he calls her bug haha great job happy thanksgiving! |
![]() ![]() Once again, a really good chapter. I love all of your characters. I only have one comment, which is about when you wrote: “I hear you,” Cole said as they approached the reception desk. Cole spoke quietly to her and she lifted her phone to let someone know they were there. She hung up and directed them where to go. You might want to put that they approached the receptionist or something because the word "her" came out of nowhere, and I got a bit confused. Other than that, the chapter was great though. :) I eagerly await your next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() One thing I love about your writing is how you can have such a huge cast of people and yet not having it really confusing! Great work, can't wait for the action |
![]() ![]() ![]() they're not boring at all! love it! |
![]() ![]() I love fluffy drama! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Every time I get to the end of a chapter, I get sad! Lol. Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() Aw that was so cute! Of course little Bug is a Hannah Mon... I mean Halee Marie fan. What little girl isn't these days? Lol They weren't boring! They were relaxingly cute. :D But whoo! Can't wait for some good ol' drama. haha. Thanks for all the updates! And HAVE A GOOD THANKSGIVING! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This wasn't boring, though! It was sweet. I love Nat. I thought the guys agreed not to mention anything about her? So why did Cole spill the beans? I was totally waiting for RJ to yell or say something mean. He doesn't want the press all over her for a reason... |
![]() ![]() ![]() No, don't be SILLY! It was not boring. I loved it. & I love it when my fave. bands win awards! yay! & I love it when they dress up. I was imagining the guys in nice suits... crisp white/blue/black/w/e shirts under their jackets... maybe the first few top buttons undone...*daydreams* Hot! LOL. Sorry, I got distracted. :D (also some dark sunglasses... maybe aviators...to add to the sexy mysterious look... LOL! okay, that's it. promise. :D) |
![]() ![]() ![]() DUDE! lol. I just felt like saying that. All the guys in this chapter did. :) The whole dialogue in the store was so funny! Cole is so unromantic sometimes... & the breast pump scene... "...helps the mother to breathe while she’s in labor?" lmao. Why do a lot of people react like that? It's not like they have a used model sitting on display. (hopefully they don't. THAT would be gross.):P How AWESOME would that be? Both bands. One tour. Insane. In the greatest way ever possible! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() it wasn't boring at all! i'm glad you kept it. can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE IT! please update again soon! wow :) |