|Reviews for Ignorance or Knowledge|
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Wow, beautiful. Your writing style is so amazing. It flows so well. I loved every bit of it espicially
"Ever since he told you how I feel,
I have to close my mouth with a hot, liquid seal,
I’ve got a silence pact against you,
Because I’ve got a bad heart that’s blue,"
Amazing and beautiful. You are definately one of my favorite authors.
| Luna Turner chapter 1 . 12/29/2008
So I thought the rhyming went well for the most part. There was one awkward part where you put "desperate" and "met" as a pair and I just don't really think they make a great one.
There was a couple stanzas toward the end where they felt kind of random and out there, but maybe that's just me.
I liked the heart of the poem though. It's something we can all relate to, and something I was totally not expecting from the title.
I enjoyed reading this piece.
| A Little Less Than Dust chapter 1 . 12/17/2008
Thanks for you review. I love this poem, it's easy to empathize with and quite well-written. I'm going to keep reading your stuff.