Reviews for Living Disorder
Isca chapter 1 . 11/12/2008
"To guide their luminescence into colour." Beautiful/Chilling imagery.

"Her admirers are captives of these prison bars." That's one of my favourite lines in this poem. It's so honest and real.

The fourth stanza was particularly vivid and well-written.
simply amanda chapter 1 . 11/11/2008
So, I want to say "VERY poetic!" but, this is a poem, so naturally one could assume that poems would turn out to be poetic. Alas, most of them do NOT, and this one was especially abstract (but in the good way!) and it still managed to make sense and be figuratively beautiful with all the words in between. So I'm going to say it, and now you'll understand: VERY poetic!

The first stanza was my favorite; I like the point of view the narrator has.

Awesome job :) Keep it up!