I love this story! Its truly awesum :-)

That was... GREAT! xD Nice one.

wow dude ...i am speechlesssssssss seriouslyyyyyyyyyy boy dat was ONE HECK of stry its LOVABLE ND KISSABLE GOSH i love MIA d speech :P she gave i had tears
God bless :)

That was so amazing. I absolutely loved it, and I was close to tears at the end there, when Mia started crying.

I liked the speech, it was really, especially since Aaron was standing right there for the whole thing. I kind of guessed that he was, but it was still entertaining when she saw him.

Thanks for another great read, I love your style of writing!

While I enjoy your writing style, and the way you planned this out, there are some things you should work on maybe, yes?

- You kinda skipped in the character development. Readers need to witness the characters go through their changes, and I find it a little abrupt in this story. And it makes it look melodramatic, which it shouldn't be with the material you have, you know?

But it has a good concept, I like it.

Just so kissable? Lovely oneshot.

This is seriously awesome. I love it! Haha, I love Mia's outburst...I feel like if I were in her situation, I would do exactly the same. I tend to get overly-emotional as well :P

Adorable! Wonderful! I love it!

Really well written, I just LOVE it! Keep up the good work!

Grtz Silencia

ps: please check out my stories too!

Aw. that was cute.

Unrealistic, but cutee.

Aw, this story - as predictable and cheesy as it is made me so happy! I'm a happy smiling idiot right now, and I'm actually happy, dammit! I'm happy! And my heart fills like it's full of hope and love or whatever. I thought no story could do that. Heck, I thought love itself wouldn't do it to me. But a simple oneshot did. You're probably the best author ever. And now I'm craving japanesse udon. Uh, it's ok, I just write what I think - don't worry. I have a rule about not deleting anything I wrote in reviews unless it's a grammar mistake. If people don't like how I feel after their fiction then too bad. What I'm trying to say is, thank you. Thank you so much.

Ah! What is it with you and amazing one-shots? Can't you write one ONCE that isn't so cute and fluffytastic? You make me insane...but I can't help but love your writing. And your penname, by the way. ANYWAY..awesome job!

Aahh. So I know how she feels, and I really like this story, and it's not really corny or cliche or any other horrible stuff.. it's realistic.

I also hate you for taking me away from my studying.

I'd make this review longer but it's past midnight and my brain doesn't function well at times like these.

Well done. :).

:D i love the humor here, it's just so...funny :)

great story...i like it that the plot is pretty different from others i've read

keep writing

Story of my life. Mostly. Well, sort of. But seriously, I love this; Mia's rant is so perfectly written, and Aaron's emotions-leaking-through personality is so adorable (does that make any sense?). The grammar is perfect (as far as I can tell-but then again, I was too engrossed to be paying much attention), and your writing is incredibly natural. Love it!

Osprey