Reviews for Twisted Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hi was wondering if I could read your stories? they sound really interesting! thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() excuse me but in this messege of yours u said 'go to...' go to where? i am very interested in your stories. thus give more precisions. thanks,Yvanni. |
![]() ![]() hey, i really love this story. can you please add me |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I really wanna read this sorry please add me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heeyyyy! I just made an account because i want to read this story...your FB link no longer works and they won't let me inbox you for 24hrs so i thought i'd leave a message. I really wanna read this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! With stories like these you never know which way its going to go. If you have it go so the main character ends up with the person they tried to make jealous then you have to make sure the dude is not a douche and that you include flirting. If you have the main character end up with the person she's using to make someone jealous then you to have create a relationship between them and you did a good job with that |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not sure if I will want to read a story about Victoria though. Thanks for the great read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her mum is super annoying! Such blatant favouritism! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't understand. I thought Kyle didn't even know her name. So how could he have done all that to get her to notice? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwww... He's getting comfortable with her. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha. I'm loving the story, can't stop reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Uh oh, this isn't going to go down well. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonder why he doesn't like anyone touching him... maybe he was abused when he was younger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Honestly... she has the nerve to call someone else a 'B'? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome series! The plot kept me interested (maybe too interested, I have a bad habit of reading non-stop without reviewing if I see that the story's finished.. sorry! :) I really liked the whole love rectangle situation. I also liked the characters, especially Veronica. I like the way the 4 main characters are very different. I think the ending was really good, even though it's no it's not a happy ending with everyone and I liked the way Victoria gained the reader's sympathy. I'm adding this to my community! It's not 100% cliche, but it had the whole '2 people pretending to date fall in love' (though Travis was in love with her before that), the 'unpopular girl with one of the most popular guys' and the queen bee antagonist going on. I say that as a good thing though, I'm a sucker for cliches ;P |