Reviews for Twisted Life |
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![]() ![]() ![]() YAH he has liked her teh whole time...and he used victoria to get her...AW yah now comes all teh touching and kissing scenes between ronnie and travis...YAHH...lol YOU HAVE TO UPDATE SUPERS SUPER SOON!1 ~abby~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good, but it feels as though you drew a lot of attention to him flinching at her touch after she pulled him away from the fight only to forget about it. Would have liked to have seen more on that. Hopefully we'll get more insight later. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That. Was. A. FREAKING. BRILLIANT. CHAPTER! Damn. I think my heart just melted by the sweetness of it all :D You're a gripping writer. Update soon! Soon!Soon! Love, SP |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it its awesome wow, i just love this story great work keep it up take care |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww That was sweet! Die Kyle! Die!lol Update soon! Please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww... & Wow! I can't believe this! Kyle was a scheming jerk who has always liked Victoria and Travis actually went out with her to get Veronica? Man...that was stupid. But I guess she's right, it worked. I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So...i think Kyle is the only loser here, lol. Cuz everyone has someone liking them except him... And I kinda felt bad for Vicky (for like .01 seconds) because Travis didn't like her and was only with her because of her sis. So...what I don't get...If Travis liked Veronica but went out with Victoria, and Kyle liked Victoria...how come he didn't go out with Veronica? Instead of cheating with his bff's girl? I mean, I assume since Kyle knew Travis liked Veronica that Travis knew Kyle liked Victoria. lol, that sounded confusing even to me. But, yeh, good story :) Is this the end? or more *hint hint* ~P.S. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! i love it |
![]() ![]() ![]() MORE MORE WOO WOO YEAH. Bring Victoria back in, haven't heard from her in a while o-o |
![]() ![]() ![]() WO! udpate again soon. at least they'e together now. so far... |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! post more or i will cover you with honey and set hungry wild bears loose inside your house! lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING! Kyle is jerkhead, and I had a bunch of other mean insults (one being cum guzzler and dickwad) but then my computer went caput. So happy Kyle left, he and Victoria are perfect for each other (both jerks), but I hope that Victoria doesn't go and decide to... well... yeah I do cause that would mean more story, but still! Travis always liked her! YAY! And they kissed! The two that hate people and being touched! YAYAYAYAYAY! SO HAPPY! UPDATE! Love, Dani |
![]() ![]() Yay! It seems 4 ever since u last updatd this story! That u :) |
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![]() ![]() ![]() yayy! finally! wo ho...now what's next! update son! -kay gee |