I love it when you updated fast! lol. This chapter is an opening for something more, eh?

Ommt. More...more, more, more, more, MORE! Holy crap I love this!

hi

yeppy... u updated...

No the "To" n "Too" do not bother me, i just pointed that out to u.

great going

am waiting to know Evan's secret.

Ronnie is so cool.

take care

i think travis likes her too!

Ooh I'm all excited that we get a PROPER smile soon :) yay

Anyway to this actual chapter, he flirted :O

And a sweet kinda flirt too.

You have no idea how smiley I am from those two things although it may also due to the deliriousness that sets in at 3 in the morning so this will be a short and less raving review :) aren't you happy

Can't wait for next chapter, de va ju just said that for The Way Things Were...

Wee~ I like this chapter. Ronnie and Travis! Yeah! )

hm...I bet her sister did something to her...

D: it's sad she has no friends..

hey, this is a pretty cool story!

keep it going! x)

i prefer travis and ronnie! kyle seems like a real jerk. the stereotypical jock; stupid and screws any walking object. her sister vicky sounds like a slut anyway. they are both on my hit list. stupid ppl. write more about travis!

Awesome story! Please continue updating!

jeez, this Kyle guy seems sort of a jerk, to keep pretending that he doesn't know her...

(not that it's mentioned in this chapter)

and what's with Travis' aversion to touching and smiling?

heheh they're so cute together!

Aww one day soon we'll see a real full-on amazing loving smile from Travis to Veronica.

Their mum sounds great, very suspicious :)

Can't wait for the next chapter, I really like these characters :D

I am absolutely loving this story. Will we ever learn why Travis doesn't like to be touched? I hope to see him getting more comfortable touching Veronica. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad to see that you update quickly. Good work and I can't wait to see what happens.

loved it.

seriously.

is she goign to fall in love with travis?