Reviews for Twisted Life
CATpuccino chapter 6 . 11/15/2008
I love it when you updated fast! lol. This chapter is an opening for something more, eh?
Scar chapter 6 . 11/15/2008
Ommt. More...more, more, more, more, MORE! Holy crap I love this!
angelblissjoy chapter 6 . 11/15/2008

yeppy... u updated...

No the "To" n "Too" do not bother me, i just pointed that out to u.

great going

am waiting to know Evan's secret.

Ronnie is so cool.

take care
Toyomi chapter 6 . 11/15/2008
i think travis likes her too!
buzzgirl37 chapter 6 . 11/15/2008
Ooh I'm all excited that we get a PROPER smile soon :) yay

Anyway to this actual chapter, he flirted :O

And a sweet kinda flirt too.

You have no idea how smiley I am from those two things although it may also due to the deliriousness that sets in at 3 in the morning so this will be a short and less raving review :) aren't you happy

Can't wait for next chapter, de va ju just said that for The Way Things Were...
SierralaineWalsh chapter 6 . 11/15/2008
Wee~ I like this chapter. Ronnie and Travis! Yeah! )
superficialSagacity chapter 6 . 11/15/2008
hm...I bet her sister did something to her...

D: it's sad she has no friends..
pcookieness chapter 2 . 11/15/2008
hey, this is a pretty cool story!

keep it going! x)
Hazelnut Romance chapter 6 . 11/15/2008
i prefer travis and ronnie! kyle seems like a real jerk. the stereotypical jock; stupid and screws any walking object. her sister vicky sounds like a slut anyway. they are both on my hit list. stupid ppl. write more about travis!
if I could only fly chapter 5 . 11/15/2008
Awesome story! Please continue updating!
superficialSagacity chapter 5 . 11/14/2008
jeez, this Kyle guy seems sort of a jerk, to keep pretending that he doesn't know her...

(not that it's mentioned in this chapter)

and what's with Travis' aversion to touching and smiling?
jenjen-0 chapter 5 . 11/14/2008
heheh they're so cute together!
buzzgirl37 chapter 5 . 11/14/2008
Aww one day soon we'll see a real full-on amazing loving smile from Travis to Veronica.

Their mum sounds great, very suspicious :)

Can't wait for the next chapter, I really like these characters :D
Michelle Richard chapter 5 . 11/14/2008
I am absolutely loving this story. Will we ever learn why Travis doesn't like to be touched? I hope to see him getting more comfortable touching Veronica. I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm glad to see that you update quickly. Good work and I can't wait to see what happens.
CallMeAlice chapter 5 . 11/14/2008
loved it.


is she goign to fall in love with travis?
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