Amazing, absolutly amazing. It's too bad this hasn't gotten more reviews. It deserves many more. Is the reason the rest is missing that it got published? If so, you should probably put a note on the bottom saying that.

Wow. This story was AMAZING! I see why it won an award!

Engrossing, to steal a word from you. That is definitely what your story is. I was amused by your intro and the dialogue is so mature and natural. I have no complaints, which is fairly rare. I am waiting to see how everything ties in.

My only question is if the entire story will be inside an interrogation room?

A very interesting story and a very catchy prose style. It takes real talent to so effectively paint out a story and images while the character is simply telling it-interview style-and you deliver wonderfully. I look forward to reading some more as well as finding out what these police officers are going to do with her.

This is very intriguing- though it's clear where you picked up the scenery, this is nonetheless quite an interesting story, and I wouldn't mind seeing more of it.

Particularly liked the Versailles part.

Erisah

Just keeps getting better and better ;)

I love the way you describe things, I feel like I'm being sucked into the story as well ...

Haha, keep up the good work! _b

Zomg! This is excellent! Well done!

Your writing style has really improved too - it's quite different from before. lol .. I'm intrigued to see just how Dr Fitzgerald is gonna take this story in his stride XD

Here's hoping there's going to be a second chapter~! Waiting patiently for updates on your other stories, too b *has recently gotten obsessed with vampire stories*

Keep up the good work! b(o)d