Quite an offputting ending in comparison to the beginning, but its really awesome. :D Nice :)

~ForeverBehindTheImpression / HighOnBrokenWings~

thats really good! it really paints a good picture in your head! it flows extremely well!

I like the way you wrote this poem. The emotion is really truly sad. Keep writing! POETRY IS FUN!

Aw! Your going to make me cry... (sniffel)

awe, that's sad. :)

You really get the feeling across.

I want to get all motherly with the narrator and say, Don't worry, there's another one out there for you yet.

I liked the theme, like all of the non-returned love, and your phrases and whatnot. rather long too.

keep it up! :)