Reviews for Voluntary Fright
ZyggyGirl chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
This was really good. There were a few punctuation errors, but other than that it was well-written.

I really liked the part about misspelling 'I love you', because it adds a very human touch to it. I think we've all made those typos in a moment of anxiety.

The last line was epic.

Well done!