Reviews for If This Were a Fairytale
scattered-strings chapter 14 . 12/26/2008
Wow. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Her mother is such a mad cow.
predict.this chapter 14 . 12/25/2008
I hope the whole thing ends well. :)
MidorixGrl chapter 14 . 12/25/2008
aww, so interesting. what is camden up to?

i really like how you're tying the story btw (:
righthere431 chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
just give up Elle! Camden likes Finley! and her dad could at least check on them so he could finally know what's going on!

p.s. Merry Christmas!
righthere431 chapter 11 . 12/25/2008
lol what a way to rip one Toby... but you're still so awesome! and I'm so glad that Camden's friends like her!
Thu chapter 5 . 12/25/2008
Hey, I was just wondering that is Camden partially Vietnamese? Hmms, because I think you said that his father or mother is named Xuan, which is a Vietnamese name. Sorry, I'm just curious and sorry for my bad grammar. I love your story so far. I hope you keep on writing it.
FarFromGrace chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
I still can't get over how quickly you update!

I like Finley and Camden's new lunch table. And the introduction of her dad was a nice addition. Will you describe why she's with her mom if she's an alcoholic if her dad is still existent. Sorry, that's probably not a big deal.

I do have to give the evil step-sister credit though, she's one persistent woman.
BanishedPrince chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
Good update, can't wait for the rest.
toffeecakesxox chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
Merry Christmas, Sammy! :) Have a Happy Holidays!

Awesome chapter! I love Mr. Carter so far - much better than his wife. :D

toffeecakesxox chapter 11 . 12/25/2008
OK, that ending? HILARIOUS. I was giggling the entire time.

And, yay! Some people are on Prince Charming's and Cinderella's side! W00T!

-toffeecakesxox. :)
AndstillIRise chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
why can't her father come and take her and the kids away? who is paying for them to live like they do? does the mom have a job, or does the dad pay child support? surely the court will side with the dad if the mom is abusing finley? can't wait to read the next one. peace
Aurette chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
I'm absolutely loving this story. Camden is a sweetheart, and I love Finley and her little siblings. It's really well written for a NaNoWriMo story (speaking as a NaNoer myself, I can definitely say my attempts weren't... that polished). You said you don't like it as much as your other stories, so I'll definitely be reading your others. Keep up the good work, I'm definitely enjoying your writing!
J. C. Hunter chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
sigh. the mum is seriously screwed up. smashing a plate over your daughter's head? if that isn't the epitome for dysfunctional, i don't know what is.
ehM chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
nice! :D

i wondered how her dad didn't even try to check up on her all these years. i mean, her parents are divorced, yes, but still he should have checked on her.

can't wait for the next chap..:D
gulistala chapter 12 . 12/25/2008
Hold on, how long has it been since he last spoke to them? The father, I mean. Why did he not try and do something about them earlier? He could've, you know, kept going. Right?
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