Reviews for If This Were a Fairytale
Hypothetically chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
i'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this. it seems to be very promising and i like the style you've written this chapter in.

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scattered-strings chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
Oh. I like the sound of this story and that's one of my favourite poems. So the mother is the birth mother of the little girl?
gulistala chapter 2 . 11/14/2008
I call this a cliffie even if it is the point of a prologue. It's still a cliffie and just as merciless as a cliffie.

*cries* I really want to read this!
toujoursmoi chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
Hey

Great start so far. Maybe if you tried the Old English sort of laungauge with this chapter as it started in past tense and its the 'Once upon A time' Though it is modern so maybe it might be a bit over the top.

Anyway Keep up the Great work An update soon

Maria
Silencia chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
I jut wanna read more and more and more and more (and so on and on XD)

Grtz Silencia
PrincessPeach131 chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
I'm so excited for the story it seems so different and interesting and yay! Hope more comes out soon!
DesireToSmile chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
I want to read more!

Very eye-grabbing. It reeled me in!

I liked the "once upon a time..." style for this chapter.

I don't know if I'd like the whole story in this "tense" (if you are planning on doing the whole thing in that sense in the first place!)

Can't wait to read next chapter :)

D.T.S :)
HelloLovely chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
Ooh! I was literally just talking to my friend about how much i love fairy tales. I love when people do modern day fairy tales like this one. I can't wait to read more!

Love,

Becca
cathuman chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
Sounds very interesting. I'm excited to read more!
The Latest Plague chapter 1 . 11/13/2008
i like "mirror" by Silvia Plath.
Faith Adeline chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
Great start. I love where it's going, it seems promising. I love reading spins on my favorite fairytales :) Keep it up and update soon!

Faith
SocialInhalation chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
whoa, you got me interested!

update soon, i want the story to begin! _
superficialSagacity chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
Ooh, a twist on a classic...

That's sort of weird that her birth mother would hate her..

but I guess there are exceptions in everything...
adnama3121 chapter 2 . 11/13/2008
Ahh, that's sad, people can be so cruel

~Amanda~
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