Reviews for Disease
evancalous-lavelle chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
This was odd, to be honest. I was not at all expecting this from the summary. I did like it though. It was very out-of-body-experience like. I do enjoy reading your writing you are a very talented writer! :D Please do write more soon! x
FFAdminDeleteAccount chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
I hate it when people won't review one shots! This is really great. I noticed you added me as your favorite author so I checked your profile (sneaky of me, but I'm morbidly curious as to whom my fans are), and this one shot caught my attention. Of course it's the perfect description of my teenage crushes, but sadly, I didn't get the promising ending that this one had. Wonderful adrenaline rush to the description, and excellent grammar. I did find myself reading slowly despite the accelerated feeling of the story because the descriptions were sometimes too close together. Possibly spreading them out, maybe creating a few one sentence shocks here and there would make it easier to read fast and feel fast, just like the character is. Only a suggestion, though, it's still a great read.