I appreciate the line breaks in the first stanza. The whole poem is well organized, but the imagery in the first stanza is really the most provocative.

You didn't need to say you saw oblivion. That was obvious from the start, and it comes across a little over the top.

Still, I strongly identify what you mean to convey. It came across very clearly, a notable accomplishment.

Overall, I like it.

Wonderful poem again, KissTodayGoodbye.

Narq.

As do I. Tempting, isn't it?