Good job finishing this thing. Good luck with your next project. And good luck to your heroins/heroes.

Ohh... I see no mistakes this chapter. Good job! The story seems to be getting more serious each time... Is it going to end the next chapter? Please update soon!

Andrew became the new Grim Reaper. Ok, I think that this must have given him some wisdom. I hope it did, cause it will be hell for the people of earth.

Anyway, If all this proves to be an elaborate from Nicholas to get her, I am going to be really pissed. Mostly because your heroine is lasy and wishy-washy. What does she want, someone to say to her "Get him to your bed!" to actually do what she wants?

"So," Nicholas said, "you fart when you orgasm."

M... I believe orgasm is a noun... Maybe Reach orgasm or a similar phrase would solve this typo?

Story-wise, I think that Nicholas moving in is great... Too bad the Grim-reaper wanted to die... What was the reaper's name anyway? I guess It's not too important right now... Nova needs to do her homework. Keep uploading!

Ok, that guy is a dick. Trully. Unquestionably so. And that gall is too lazy for her own good. I mean, really! She is trying just to get by, when she could search for a better home. Anyway, it's her life to live I guess. So Death wants to die, and the new Death is an asshole...

I'd like to take my chances with Terry Pratchets Death please.

This is so entertaining!

I love it!

Good job.

"Why don't we hang out a little bit, and see if we are actually compatable or not. See if we get along?"

A minor typo... It's compatible. Moving along...

"Luckily, since everyone but me was immortal, we could literally go anywhere."

Umm... Sorry if I didn't understand but... Why is it that they could go anywhere? Does being immortal restrict you to certain areas?

Speaking frankly, I think that Andrew is a little unfit for Nova... Why is it that Nicholas behaves so well with her? Great upload as always. Keep going!

So she is in love with Santa, Nicholas, and she is seting him up with one of the few women she can compete with, plus she dates a self centered jerk that will make her life hll. He has STALKER all over him.

High maintenance people. Why don't they bloody admit the truth ad be done with? Because there will be no story ne?

I just noticed that on the previous chapter, Andrew was referenced as a boy (as in child?)... Anyway, the story is getting more interesting... Is Nova semi-immortal too? Keep uploading! You're doing a great job.

This is certainly an interesting story...

I can't see any flaws with it... Keep going!

(Sorry, this isn't a constructive review, is it?)