Reviews for The Fight for Flight
Cecily Mitchell chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
So used to everyone portraying Cinderella as someone who needed escaping from her family I really like the "what if" presented in this story. Thank you so much for a job well done
XJazz-HandsX chapter 1 . 12/5/2008
So good. See, you can write, you just need to get on with it :P But seriously, this was really good, you're damn good at conveying the emotions. What grade did you get for it? If it wasn't an A then your teacher is a fool.
CeriseCherry chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
It's very good so far, though a little confusing. In that last paragraph, first sentence, do you mean drafty and not draughty? You could get better, I think, if you clear up a few bits of the story. I like it, and keep rolling, girl! Luck.
Lana Sky chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
Interesting spin. I loved this! The writing style was very elegant and I caught the emotions right away. Great job!

I'll keep my eye out for more. :D

nicola