|Reviews for Loaded|
| PoetOfSaiMiHunManKal chapter 1 . 9/21
This was beautiful. As someone who's gone through a LOT of bullying, ostracism, racism, discrimination, and overall misery in school, I can't even begin to describe how much I can relate to the words in this poem. On many occasions I've fantasized of massacring my oppressors but I never had the guts to do so in real life.
As for the poem itself, the overall structure of short lines indicates that the narrator is tired of speaking (or living) and I can see why this would be included. The list of feelings at the beginning was also great as it allows us to feel the misery these victims feel from the very beginning of this poem.
An excellent piece. Well done.
| Lately.gone chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Yet we never listen to their side, just because we can't, we blame.
| Devoted reader 12 chapter 1 . 5/21/2009
| A. Harrison chapter 1 . 11/16/2008