"If we die in there I'll kill you"? WTF, DUDE? I don't normally read romances, but this is actually pretty schweet... You know, as I type this, there's a random advertisement on the bottom of the screen for Disney Princess balloons... heehee. Rawk on.

"If we die in there I'll kill you." I loved that! Hehe! Write on and write more. YAYYAYYAY!

POST THE NEXT CHAPTER! AH! *glare*

ah *scream* HE'S GONNA KILL HIMSELF! *hide under blanket*

I really REALLY REALLY REALLY like it! I like Derrick..I think. :) Kep writin' cuz u rock at it!

oh crap...? I think. Is that good or bad... (sigh) Fine, fine, I'll keep one reading...

yay! i love it so far!

E.D. 'the instructor called out the shots out from the side of the room' (delete the first 'out')

you spelled orphans wrong

'but did you have to get Luke armor that dirty' (make Luke plural)

Good setup for a story so far.

Yay! U finally wrote something! I luv it! Keep writing! Is this the story you needed help on? Or is this a different one?

~lael~