Reviews for Liar
hitomi100 chapter 1 . 1/30/2009
I love it!

especialy the end 2 lines that were so creepy and I love the feeling when I'm creeped out!
K. Molle chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
haha I learned as a youngester get the truth out and it'll save you a lot. If I lied I'd get a swift beating. So now I stay true to myself and don't get caught in lies. Good job with your piece.
wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 12/4/2008
I love the way the poem progresses: introduction, specific "skills" and "talents", and then a sharp twist.

As I read through the middle two stanzas I was reminded of Natasha Bedingfield's "Pirate Bones" - 'I might have the treasure but I'll be lying alone', and I thought urgh I feel sorry for this girl! So well done for making me react to it I liked the repition of "I" as well :D

The one negative thing I would say is the rhyme, which is quite vague, but then again most people prefer free verses so it might just be me being obsessed :P

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May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 11/15/2008
I really love this poem. Everyone has a dark side. Lying isn't good, but everyone does it. I'm glad you stopped lying. Peace.