I love this and I honor the motive behind it, it is so true.

Great job!

~toodles~

I love the concept of this poem. It's a good idea :)

There are a couple of typos, though, and also I think that maybe the last line makes the poem sound unfinished, as if it should be leading onto something else.

The errors I noticed were:

"Saying so much words that I fear" should be '...so many...'

"I wish I weren’t here" I think should be '...wasn't here...' but I'm not that sure on that one

"I can’t stand you tone" should be '...your tone...'

I hope it doesn't seem like I'm nagging. I think that it's a really good poem ]

-Amy