Reviews for I N C O M P L E T E
OneWingedAngel666 chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Amazing, the narrator is universal so that anyone can walk in her shoes. Extremely well written. IT DOES NOT SUCK. just grammatical errors. eh but whats new. CHEER UP EMO KID. . From your bestest friend- Haruhi Suzumiya!
misery sister chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Gosh, the narrator is so depressing. I've felt incomplete or lacking, but never this...severe? Hahaha. I feel like I want her to be complete. :) Excellent writing.

Good luck on your future writings!