Reviews for Drowning at the Fingertips
Isca chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Aww, I really liked the imagery in the first stanza; it was so beautiful! The awkwardness...the dress... :)

Wow...falling from apple trees and rooftops onto asphalt...that's intense and powerful!
BlackBlueDreams chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Simply gorgeous. I adore the line 'it drowns in my depth', it's so beautiful and rich.