Reviews for Wordplay
Time To Change chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Incredible. Fantastic. Lovely rhythm, extremely eloquent, touching, with a tinge of humour and lightheartedness somewhere in there. It's lovely.
marin chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
incredible.

"I’m touching, feeling all the things

that can’t be seen…

if I choose to listen."

the words are alluring...truly.
tangerine dreamer chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Wow. For a poem about not talking, you have a very imense vocabulary! I really liked this. I love the descriptions, they're so vivid and real. The first two lines open perfectly and the last two close nicely. Keep up the good work!