Reviews for Ray's Own Cliche
S.H. Marr chapter 5 . 5/28/2012
Hmmmm...Luke couldn't possibly be his boyfriend. And probably not the friend whose birthday he was celebrating, because he wouldn't have said "a friend" (because that sounds awkward, then). Brother, maybe, or best friend. Cousin. Something like that. It's my official guess.
S.H. Marr chapter 3 . 5/25/2012
AAhh, high-strung characters are some of the most entertaining ones, if done right. I'd say Ray probably is. He's just so whiny and type-A about everything. And I love Leo there to foil for him.
mary4angelus chapter 1 . 11/16/2008
Hi! Just finished reading your fic and I can't wait for you to update.

Great story, well written and I couldn't see any mistake, so keep up the good work! D