Reviews for Under A Full Moon It Began
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PolkadotBubble625 chapter 13 . 1/23/2009
Sorry it took me so long to read and review this; I'm kinda behind on reading all of my alerts. Well, I think you made a good choice for not writing that sex scene; you shouldn't write something unless your comfertable writing it.

Anyways, I really liked this chapter! And I thought your descriptions were done really well. I also liked your word choice on this one. I think your writing is improving from being just good, to being great. Well, with that said, I'm looking foward to that next update D
QuothTheWren chapter 13 . 1/14/2009
Hehe, good luck! Sounds like you had trouble writing this chapter (or deciing whether or not to do a sex scene- I think you're right when you said it was better just to leave it, if it's something you're not comfortable with writing. God knows I'd find it impossible XD). But I actually really liked this chapter- it was good remembering just when it all started, and thinking about where Miho came from. Plus, your writing style seemed to be just as good as usual. :D
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 12 . 12/10/2008
Once again, a nice chapter. By the way, I liked how you put those random authors notes in there. Anyways, about the sex scene, I agree with QuothTheWren. I'm not a huge fan for M rated stories (unless it's violence; i can live with that), but I will still read, because I am here to support this story and review! But it's actually your decision in the end, so do what you want XD
QuothTheWren chapter 12 . 12/9/2008
Howling ninjas... that'll be making me laugh for a long time yet XD. Hm... I think maybe if you're going to do a sex scene, nothing too graphic- you don't need it, the way you've been writing it is good already. Maybe just implying what's going on? That's my suggestion, anyway.
inthedark1439 chapter 12 . 12/9/2008
wow.. this is a great story.. i love it very much.. well.. pls update soon..
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 11 . 12/3/2008
Yay! Another update! And don't worry about the wait. It isn't easy to update as frequently as you are, but you're doing a good job at it!

Anyways, I really liked the words you chose in your descriptions in this chapter. But I especially liked this phrase "Even so, that expression tugged at his heartstrings, giving him the urge to protect this fierce but fragile master of his." Well, once again, nice job!
QuothTheWren chapter 11 . 12/2/2008
Wow, the descriptions here are really good! I would suggest trying not to make Miho too perfect (she isn't, just a possibility) since that would make her unrealistic. But well done, good chapter!
QuothTheWren chapter 10 . 11/29/2008
Yay, villains! I like how you introduced them all (through Ruka's point of view- seems like he knows the most about everyone) and cracked up laughing at the commentary at the end
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 10 . 11/29/2008
Another nice chapter. I don't know... I seem to get confused between the villans, but that's just my problem. Maybe I'll re-read that chapter so I don't get confused...
QuothTheWren chapter 9 . 11/27/2008
Yes, Wren's just fine. Ooh, villains! I look forward to it:) And I liked this chapter, it made me laugh.
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 9 . 11/26/2008
Do you already have your chapters written out? Otherwise, how do you update every day? It's impossible for me to even update every two weeks! Anyways, I like how you use similes (did I spell that right?). Like in the beginning about the sponge. Anyways, I'm looking foward to the next chapter :D
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 8 . 11/25/2008
Very nice chapter. Sora seemed kinda cute. Oh, and I liked that last paragraph that you put in there; it's kind of mysterious. Well, update soon :D
QuothTheWren chapter 8 . 11/25/2008
Well, I don't hate you :) I like this story- the plot's developing well, and I'm interested to see what happens next. If I have any criticism at all, it's that the chapter where she says goodbye to her mother (sorry, I've forgotten which one it was!) didn't seem quite real, but overall, I think it's good!
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 7 . 11/24/2008
Okay, here's this other review. Well, I like the name Sora, and I like this chapter. I also like how you compared his thought to an open book; very nice. Anyways, update soon, because I'll be waiting ;)
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