Reviews for Under A Full Moon It Began
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 6 . 11/24/2008
Sorry I didn't get in a review for chapter six earlier. Well, I'm gald that she dind't kill him! I kinda thought she wouldn't. Well, I found some typos, but noting to big. And yes, i agree, school can really be a strain. Anyways, I'll be off now to read the next chapter :D
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 5 . 11/21/2008
Short, yes, but good nonetheless. I'm looking foward to seeing more of these villan people. And by the way, I like the name of the army: "Miho's Ninja Army". Very original, but that's okay. Well, I'll be here waiting for more :D
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 4 . 11/20/2008
Yeah... my pen name's kinda long, huh? Well, go ahead and call me polkadot :D Well, on with the review. I thought it was good. Miho seems... i don't know... she seems very caught on revenge... well actually, i don't know. Sorry, I can't really think today. Well, as always, I'll be waiting for an update.
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 3 . 11/19/2008
Aw... that was sad... Poor Miho... But I think that's awesome that she's a ninja! Your descriptions and word choice were very good. Nice work! I can't wait to see more :D
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 2 . 11/18/2008
Aww...he died...that's sad... :'( And yes, I still like it! I like the way you described the red moon. And oh, I found a typo or two, but those little things don't matter so much; everyone makes typos in their work (especially me!) Well, all in all good work, and I'm looking foward to seeing more!
Rr chapter 2 . 11/18/2008
haha! funny man to sa last, un c mr. dead guy. nagalit un sya? :D
Rr chapter 1 . 11/18/2008
Wah! Nice sya! Ang galing! -jumps in excitement-
PolkadotBubble625 chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
For your first story, I thought it was good :) Your summary really caught my attention. At one point, I was a bit confused on who was speaking, but I figured it out. I can't wait to see where you are going to go with this. Well, with that said, update soon :D
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