Reviews for She Will Be Loved |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMDG (*oh my ducking god, hehe*) THIS IS DUCKING GOOD, THE CLIFFHANGER THINGIE IS A GREAT WAY TO END THIS KIND OF 1-SHOT CAUSE THEN U CAN LET UR READER'S IMAGINATION GO ON A FREAKING FIELD DAY... AHHHH! |
![]() ![]() This was good I want to know what happens next My imagination is having a field day |
![]() ![]() ![]() You did the Hugs and Kisses too... Of course you did oh my GOD OF COURSE YOU DID. I'M watCHING YOU YO. WATCHING. YOU. Your level of angst is right up my alley though. it's perfect and doesn't completely destroy me (only you know the regular safe and healthy destruction of 80% of me) |
![]() ![]() ![]() awwww the Guy love her too...LOVE IT |
![]() ![]() You are literally the best at endings. One word says it all sometimes. Another great story 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this :) I love how you told their story in a short amount of words and it completely hooked me even though it was mostly her monologue. I love how much it reveals about both characters and even though hardly anything happened in this oneshot I still felt like I knew the characters intimately. I especially love the ending :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This almost made me cry. And then he whispers, "Wait." I love this oneshot! Is there a sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwww... |
![]() ![]() :O Oh, oh my gosh. This was soo good! That ending though C; |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay so, I liked it. I like what you were trying to achieve with it but I feel that it lacks any real depth. Her speech went on for far too long, she was basically rambling about wanting to get married, it was a bit uneventful and annoying. You could have added more detail so that it made sense or at least made the reason she "had no more tears left" was for something a bit more deep and meaningful. I just felt like there waa something missing. Sorry. Also, the cliffhanger was genius and I liked that part. I like how it was very abrupt but it also sounded unfinished Sorry for the long review, I don't normally review on any stories but I felt like this needed to be said. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was it ? no! . but uh yes, i like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful! I loved it :) it made me tear up... |
![]() ![]() Why the cliffhanger? It's great, though. Part 2, please? At least just another one about what happens next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() dat was bloody deep awesum..may be part2 wat happens nxt plz? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute! I loved the ending very cute (: |