|Reviews for open|
| ForeverinMoonlight chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Very nice. I especially liked the last two stanzas. You ended it really well. :)
| Isca chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
"Hurt hurls in white spaces." Nice alliteration!
"The hollow carving...has been emptied of dreams." Sorrowful imagery!
"I've been bound to your thoughts for so long." Beautiful!
I LOVE THIS! :D
| english summer rain chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
goodness, second last stanza grasped my heart and crushed it. you have some talent in making your audience feel something :)