Reviews for open
ForeverinMoonlight chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Very nice. I especially liked the last two stanzas. You ended it really well. :)
Isca chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
"Hurt hurls in white spaces." Nice alliteration!

"The hollow carving...has been emptied of dreams." Sorrowful imagery!

"I've been bound to your thoughts for so long." Beautiful!

I LOVE THIS! :D
english summer rain chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
goodness, second last stanza grasped my heart and crushed it. you have some talent in making your audience feel something :)