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![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. I especially liked the last two stanzas. You ended it really well. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Hurt hurls in white spaces." Nice alliteration! "The hollow carving...has been emptied of dreams." Sorrowful imagery! "I've been bound to your thoughts for so long." Beautiful! I LOVE THIS! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() goodness, second last stanza grasped my heart and crushed it. you have some talent in making your audience feel something :) |