Reviews for open
ForeverinMoonlight chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
Very nice. I especially liked the last two stanzas. You ended it really well. :)
Isca chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
"Hurt hurls in white spaces." Nice alliteration!

"The hollow carving...has been emptied of dreams." Sorrowful imagery!

"I've been bound to your thoughts for so long." Beautiful!

english summer rain chapter 1 . 11/17/2008
goodness, second last stanza grasped my heart and crushed it. you have some talent in making your audience feel something :)